That..... was cute....

Really love the colours, they blend perfectly.

In my opinion, it looks very rushed. There are a lot of areas where the lines and shading can be refined. I think if you spend more time on it it will come out much nicer =)

His facial expression really captures my attention, almost as if he's saying the words.... I mean like, alive. Good job on capturing it Maplerose.

Saber's waist looks a bit too thin. Other than that, I find this a very interesting crossover =P

I took full view and saw some very very slight mistakes, but your colouring totally covers them up perfectly.

If I'm not mistaken, the left thigh should be adjusted so that it looks slightly bigger than the other. The left arm is slightly short.
But these slight mistakes is nothing, so the next time you draw, it would be perfect!

The proportion and pose looks great, but the character doesn't stand out from the background because of the lack of contrast between the colours of the clothes and the floor.

The flowers looks out of perspective, as the size of all the flowers look the same. The flowers at the background shouldn't be as big as the ones in the foreground.

Your linearts and inking is one of the best I see so far on MT. The various thickness really looks good. Wish I was that good with a pen =(

Like I said.... it's random.

i must say the face is indeed awesome, and you're very good with choosing the colours. but one slight flaw is that the left arm is slightly longer than the other. still i'll fav it.

amazing details, really! the idea's really original, and the concept is pretty much interesting. who'd have thought the hanged man can be a guy hanging upside down? keep it up danielly.

for a 3 hour drawing, it is truly impressive. and it's good you use other's works as a guide, you'll improve faster like that.

merged: 03-27-2007 ~ 03:52pm
come to think of it, i have a suggestion. i can see most of your drawings are in pencil, but you might want to try out different colours to suit the mood of your drawing. try it out! i hope this helps.

if he really hates humans, i think it would be better if his expression looks more evil (or insane). character personality does not rely all on how he dresses. it's good that you have an artist to influence you, but from your character i can see it's all original. keep up the good work.

i like the textured border and the colors you used. however, i think your choice of typeface doesn't really suit the artwork, as it's too blocky. i think a handwriting like typeface would be nicer, but it's just what i think.

i really love the colors of this one.... movement in the artwork is smooth and the character really have the appeal.... but ... it's just that i'm not a fan of ecchi. still, i think this one deserves a fav. good job, kokujindesu.

rider's a pretty cool character, her evil eyes really captured my attention. one thing off bout this one is the right arm, which looks slightly shorter... for some reason i don't know there's a surf board until you mention it. but anyway, the colours are nicely chosen, cos this is definitely your style.

this is very impressive. i don't know how you made that snowy effect, but it is truly amazing. fav!

this is very impressive. i love the texture on her clothes.

hm... i've always noticed that something is missing in your drawings, but i finally know what it is. your character's clothing lacks folds and ripples, which in turn made them look rigid and stiff even when the character is doing something. the movement effect is lessen with this. but for this one, i kinda like the concept. good job anyways.

i can see you did a lot to shade this, but i have to say that the shading doesn't work here, as it made the character's skin look dusty instead. her arm position also looks a bit awkward. i think there is a lot to correct here, but i think you can do it.

the chest looks odd and pretty flat, but everything else seems ok. keep up the fine work.

hm.... eyes seem lopsided, but it's not too bad. nice shading. keep it up.

hm... it's simple, but if you could clean it up a bit (or draw it in pen) it would look nicer. just a suggestion though.

hehe, i 've always wanted to play ico, but can't seem to find it anywhere. anyway, have you played the game's prequel? it's shadow of the colossus!

back to the artwork, i can see that you really work hard for this. but i could see that the lighting on the characters is a bit off, as there are parts that are supposed to be dark that you've missed out. anyway, i could say it's a job well done.

i'm impressed by all the details, FD. the hair, accessories, folds on the clothes, and even the bg! but if there's one thing off, it's gotta be the perspective. but i can see that you put great effort in it. FAV!

ps: it's a long time since you submitted anything... but you're back!

the shading's quite good, but the neck looks like as if it's squeezed up. still it's a pretty good job.